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PostSubject: An Idea For A Mini - Series   30th August 2008, 23:11

Falcon and I have came up with this idea, well I edited a few bits so it's kinda my version Razz


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An idea for the 1st episode.

Okay, so it starts off in 2fort. We zoom slowly into BLU base from the bridge. At the bottom there should be a caption saying "BLU Mini - Base". A BLU Scout comes from the balcony and jumps onto the bridge and onto the RED balcony. He makes it into the intel room via the spiral stairs, killing a couple of soldiers along the way.

He takes the RED intel and goes up the way through to the courtyard and gets gunned down by 4 level three sentries. It then cuts to BLU having a meeting in the meeting room. They say "that was the 124th unsuccessful capture". So they decide to send in the whole team, leaving 1 guy behind. They hire 3 heavies.

One RED on the balcony looks at the whole BLU team stationed at the mini base are crossing the bridge. So the whole RED team, go onto the balcony, too scared to face the new heavies, they wait till the whole BLU team is out of sight and go set up a base in the BLU intel.

While RED are entering the base, BLU try to take out the level 3 sentries with heavy casualties. They manage to take the intel and the heavies say that they are worn out and the whole team reutrn to the BLU intel and cheering as they go along. A Scout looks at the papers and finds out that RED are making giant weapons to destroy BLU's buisness. So they radio the guy left at base to tell the main base.

It then shows the guys at BLU base in Well writing in what he is telling them. Then one guy walks in saying this war is going to go on forever. It cuts for a split second with alot of BLU and RED guys fighting in the middle CP. Just as the guy left at BLU base finishes, he turns around only to be facing the whole RED team, and he gets owned.

BLU comes in to the intel only to be gunned down by level three sentries. It then cuts back to the Well base saying that they need to stop the REDs.
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PostSubject: Re: An Idea For A Mini - Series   30th August 2008, 23:33

This all looks great and all, but when making a mini-series the first thing you do before planning the filming is writing the storyline. What's this thing about?

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PostSubject: Re: An Idea For A Mini - Series   30th August 2008, 23:57

Well, it's about BLU trying to stop RED from trying to destroy their businesses. Like they're building giant weapons to destroy the BLU bases and businesses.

So, that's all I could think off. Sad
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PostSubject: Re: An Idea For A Mini - Series   31st August 2008, 02:56

If everyone likes the idea, I would happily write the script for you guys. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: An Idea For A Mini - Series   31st August 2008, 04:18

I made a small little script for it Very Happy

Starts in 2Fort

[Camera starts from the RED side of the bridge and slowly moves towards the BLU base balcony. A little caption at the bottom says "BLU Mini - Base]

*A Scout jumps onto the bridge from the balcony*

[The camera turns around as the Scout runs across the bridge and onto the balcony]

*Scout runs into the resupply room*

[Camera is at one of the top corners and watches the Scout until he runs into the door with the spiral stairs]

*Scout runs down the spiral stairs*

[Camera awaits the Scout at the bottom of the stairs and watches the Scout until he enters one of the 2 corridors leading into the intel room]

*Scout enters intel room*

[Camera is at the table just behind the intel]

*Scout stops just in front of the intel*

[Camera goes to behind the scout]

Scout - Yo Base! There's something in this intel you would wanna see!

Base (Using the voice changing tool if possible to make it sound like the voice is on the radio) - What is it?

Scout - I took a sneak peek at the intel and on one of the papers it says that RED is planning to destroy our businesses and bases with secret weapons stationed at...

[Cuts to a RED Soldier holding a shotgun walking down the stairs in the courtyard which leads to the intel room]

[Cuts to a close up of the Scout's face]

Scout - Tell BLU main base about this.

Base - Alright.

[Camera moves to the right, revealing that the RED Soldier is behind him]

RED Soldier - What the?

[Camera cuts to a medium shot of the whole body of the Soldier]

*Scout shoots the Soldier and runs to the stairs leading to the courtyard*

[Camera follows the Scout from behind]

*Scout runs up the stairs and into the courtyard*

Scout - Oh shi-

*Scout gets gibbed by 4 level three sentries*

[Camera cuts to a Spy in the BLU meeting scene with 1 Soldier, 1 Engineer and 1 Sniper]

Spy - Alright, that's the 124th unsuccessful capture we had this week!

[Cuts to a medium shot of the Engineer]

Engineer - I've got an idea. How about we send in the whole team into their base!

[Cuts to Spy]

Spy - What?

[Cuts to Engineer]

Engineer - We'll leave one guy behind then...and hire 3 Heavies!

[Cuts to Spy]

Spy - Heavies?

[Cuts to Sniper]

Sniper - They're one of these fat guys who are really strong but are really dumb.

[Cuts to Engineer]

Engineer - The REDs would be so scared!

[Cuts to Spy]

Spy - Alright then... Miller!

[Cuts to a medium shot of Spy]

*Soldier runs up to him*

Soldier - Yes sir!

Spy - Enough with that. Gather your men and report to the courtyard!

[Cuts to courtyard with Spy standing and facing all of the nine classes]

Spy - Okay Heavy we paid a lot for you, you better be worth it.

[Cuts to Heavy[

Heavy - Wah?

[Cuts to Spy]

Spy - Where the hell are the rest?

[Cuts to Soldier]

Soldier - They're coming sir!

[Cuts to Spy]

Spy - MILLER! You're staying to guard the base, bring your men quickly because we're charging in now!

[Cuts to a RED Soldier standing on the balcony]

Soldier - Holy Crap...

[Camera turns to the side of the Soldier]

*Soldier gets headshotted*

*4 Scouts run up and get gibbed by a crit rocket*

[Camera turns to the entrance to RED base]

*2 Soldiers are standing next to each get blown up*

[Camera turns to a Scout crouching on the balcony]

*A Spy comes next to him*

[Cuts to Scout]

Scout - Looks like half of our team is dead...

[Cuts to Spy]

Spy - Get the surviving guys to come up here and follow me.

[Cuts to the courtyard with the Heavy taking all the hits from the 4 level three sentries.]

*Soldiers run in and get killed*

*Pyros come in and get killed*

*Scouts run in and get killed*

*Demomen run in and get killed*

*Heavy single handily destroys 1 sentry with his fist*

[Camera cuts to one of the sentry getting blown up by rockets]

[Camera turns to the other 2 sentries]

*Spy saps and destroys both of them*

[Cuts to Spy]

Spy - TO THE INTEL

[Camera goes to the bridge]

*5 BLU team members come out*

[Cuts to Spy]

Spy - Wow, out of 150, only 5 survived...

[Cuts to the bottom of the spiral stairs]

*BLU team members walk into the intel room*

[Camera cuts to intel room which has 2 level three sentries]

*BLU team runs in and gets killed*

[Cuts to RED scout]

Scout - Where are the other 145?

[Cuts to a noclip place in BLU Well]

*A BLU Soldier runs up to a Spy*

Soldier - We lost all men at BLU mini base 34!

[Cuts to Spy]

Spy - For god sake, we have bigger problems. Our whole global bases are at stake we need to stop the giant weapons. Gather as much men as you can!

[Cuts to Soldier]

Soldier - We can't, there's another RED base just opposite us!

[Camera cuts to middle CP]

*Soldiers and Demomen fight and blow up each other*

[Cuts to Spy]

Spy - Blow them up then!

[Black screen]

[Back to the shot]

*Soldier walks up*

Soldier - Sure did sir! We blew them up bad!

[Cuts to Spy]

Spy - Why didn't you do that before?

[Cuts to Soldier]

Soldier - I never knew we could...

[Cuts to Spy]

Spy - Okay, now gather your men!

THE END OF FIRST EPISODE.


Add in some jokes and all because I'm not a funny guy...Razz
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PostSubject: Re: An Idea For A Mini - Series   31st August 2008, 04:18

Another thing-
Who's going to voice this?
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PostSubject: Re: An Idea For A Mini - Series   31st August 2008, 04:25

We should do some lip synching.

And aren't there like voice changers?
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PostSubject: Re: An Idea For A Mini - Series   31st August 2008, 05:12

again script = good but we need a STORYLINE! (lol) For more than one episode. A storyline for every episode. It doesn't have to be detailed but just an outline of what we want it to turn out like..... please? Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: An Idea For A Mini - Series   31st August 2008, 05:44

Every episode ay? Very Happy

Episode Two - The BLUs from main base split into groups and enter teleporters built by the engineer which we send them to one of the sites the secret weapons are loaded.

What I'm thinking is that every episode would be an epic battle and a cliffhanger at the end. What I'm thinking is that we follow one of the BLU's captain. He and his squads defeat all the small sites where the weapons are located and they all join up to attack the biggest base.


We'll need to add in some jokes Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: An Idea For A Mini - Series   5th September 2008, 06:45

lol looks good =D but shouldn't gwe finish TDK first?
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PostSubject: Re: An Idea For A Mini - Series   5th September 2008, 06:59

I agree with HARLO and again, a STORYLINE!!!!!!!!!!11!!!1!!! is a plan for however many episodes you want to make. Machinima series like Leet World aren't made up each episode, the entire storyline was written before any other work is done. Remember that if you actually want to go ahead with a series.

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PostSubject: Re: An Idea For A Mini - Series   5th September 2008, 07:01

Yes, lets all finish TDK before you think too ahead and end up giving up on this unnecessary productions thing.
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PostSubject: Re: An Idea For A Mini - Series   5th September 2008, 23:19

Yeah, we should..

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